Friday, 29 November 2013

Just a pat - 33 word dialogue



"Come on. Give yourself a pat on the back, Jack. You deserve it."
"No, I don't. And you know very well."
"But you do."
"I just killed your woman in the O.R."
"Exactly."




A 33-word dialogue piece for Trifextra.

7 comments:

  1. Yikes! That's quite a friendship. :)

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  2. Whoa! I like that the whole piece is dialogue.

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  3. Thanks for linking up this weekend. Be sure to come back and vote for your favorites!

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