Ooo, sinister. Great job at putting a whole story into 33 words!
Yikes! I'll think twice before leaving the country.
Cool story!
Oh,loved the intrigue-wonder why they did that -poor chap though :P Lovely piece :-)
Ooh, how eerie! And a superb ending -- chills!
You fit a lot of story in those 33 words. Thanks for participating in our last challenge. Good luck and happy writing!
Ooo, sinister. Great job at putting a whole story into 33 words!
ReplyDeleteYikes! I'll think twice before leaving the country.
ReplyDeleteCool story!
ReplyDeleteOh,loved the intrigue-wonder why they did that -poor chap though :P Lovely piece :-)
ReplyDeleteOoh, how eerie! And a superb ending -- chills!
ReplyDeleteYou fit a lot of story in those 33 words. Thanks for participating in our last challenge. Good luck and happy writing!
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